The first job I applied for, I got it!

Hello Sam
My name is Cecil Mccracken I was in your Exterran class.Just dropping you a line to let you know that the first job I applied for, I got it! 

The fellow from Conforms HR dept said he very impressed with the way it read very professional he said .He had quite a few applicants but when he got to mine he said he had to call.
We did an interview over the phone and hired me.Thank you for for helping me with my resume.I’ve attached a copy of my resume for your viewing pleasure.

Cecil Mccracken
2009